Oh, what a perfect image. Which, considering it is about your characters, in your story, makes sense. Probably more sense than this comment makes, anyway.
But yes, that sense of the pushing and pulling of conflicting interests really shines through in this section. As does the fatigue that is wearing at them all.
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Date: 2009-06-16 11:44 pm (UTC)Oh, what a perfect image. Which, considering it is about your characters, in your story, makes sense. Probably more sense than this comment makes, anyway.
But yes, that sense of the pushing and pulling of conflicting interests really shines through in this section. As does the fatigue that is wearing at them all.