That was really good. I was expecting it to end not McShep and long before they were stranded on the planet and I was surprisingly good with that. However, I liked how everything played out. I think you gave John's boyfriend good character in very few lines and I liked that Keller was a relatable, admirable person.
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Date: 2010-04-09 09:49 am (UTC)